english essay ideas

1. Planning:   Judy

   Body 1: Everyone else wanted to sell carrots, she wanted to be a cop.

   Body 2: Stuck in concrete. Stereotype of dumb bunny. People didn't believe in her because she was just a 'dumb bunny'. Chief Bogo gave her parking duty. Didn't care that she was top of the class.

   Body 3: Gave her a crime to solve - an actual case. Judy was able to do what Chief Bogo asked. People believed in her. Not just a dumb bunny.

   
   
   

   1. Describe at least one way that a character or individual changed in the text.
      Explain how the director used audio and visual language features to help you understand the change(s).

   
   

    Judy change from being a normal person to being a cop.Everyone in the family is doing the same job.And that she want so be a cop and there is no other bunny that is a cop.

   
   

   Thanks for sharing your work so far, Jacob!
   Just keep on adding information to answer the question! Use the PLAN and the ESSAY TEMPLATE to help you!