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Friday 15 March 2019

Micheal Mew

this is my feedback from my partner  Riccardo. He had to critique my learning this is what he write about my work. 

                                                      I like the photo aka the view.
                                              Maybe use some more photo or color.
                                            Try to cut the photo more accurately.
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  1. Whaea Rowena16 March 2019 at 18:24

    Kia ora Jacob, Thank you for sharing your work. I appreciate you have missed some time in class, so well done on finishing.

    there are a couple of things i think you have done without knowing how good they are; firstly you have used orange behind a mostly blue image of the ocean. did you know that blue and orange are opposite colours? We call them contrasting colours. It means they bounce off of each other visually. on the other side you have used green behind the read. again they are contrasting colours. This is a good thing to have done. I also know the work you have put into learning to draw a bird and I am really proud of you for that. If we had more time, I would have got you to post those pages up on the bog too so that we could see your progress.

    Well done, you have lots of stuff we can use later in term two and I think you have learnt a lot.

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